AsRaTV's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Xhive]

looks very cool! the art is amazing. the only criticism i can really give is that it feels a little bit repetitive, i understand that's it's pico-8 and there are limitations and i don't know how much of the storage you've used. some more powerups could be cool like different shooting patterns or something. but it's still really cool and see you possibly on the frontpage

[Shoot N' Survive]

i'm unsure why half of the game is in spanish and half is in english, anyways i think you should make the world a bit bigger. the camera controls are cool but sometimes they are too far away from the player and you can't see behind them for some time and it can make it harder to aim. you should show the player that they need to press space for rage mode. i'm not a 100% sure but there seems to be only 2 types of enemies, if there are more types in later waves i apologize. you should add some more drops like different guns or temporary buffs. it gets stale quick but i'm sure this will be a really fun game with each update

RE-ES responds:

Yeah, My plan for the game was to make it more vast and stuff.
BUUUT, I made this game for a project in University and the Deadline was getting closer.
If I pass with the game as it is, I'll make an Special Update to make it suitable to the standards of the page (It'll come with Full English Translation and probably better UI, cannot ensure the last).
As to the enemies... There's only 2 (Zombies and Cyborgs).
The rage bar gets more and more fastly filled with every horde to fulfill the increasing spawn rate of enemies.

[Mushroom Wars V1.2 (HTML5 Version)]

the movement feels sluggish and slow and the jump is also really slow and feels weird. you should make the bullets disappear after some time because they can make it harder to move sometimes and when one landed on my head it was impossible to progress because i couldn't jump so i couldn't jump over the bullets around it, making me stuck. the enemies do nothing so there's really no challenge in the game it's just run and shoot until the end. you should also show the controls somewhere because i had to press every key on my keyboard to figure out how to jump and shoot. whenever the full version comes out and if you fix some issues you can pm me and i'll check it out

[Hangman (Pokemon)]

very cool. you should add an option to back out and choose a new pokemon without having to refresh the page. also are there all pokemon for both generations or is it just some? if it's some you should specify how many you put

[Doodle Shooter Game]

idk if you'll update it because as you said you're making many games to improve your coding.
you should add more power ups because it gets stale quickly and idk what the pp power up does . maybe more types of enemies. the enemy projectiles are hard to see because there's so many little things moving in the background so you should probably make it a bit more unique so it's easier to see. and the last thing i suggest is when you die that it brings you to the menu where you have to press space to start

good luck with your game dev journey :)

[chez clicker]

you should put text or tell the player what both counters mean, like left is clicks and right is chez. every purchase has some type of click cooldown but the bread one doesn't so when you buy it you can just spam and get an autoclicker. also i noticed with the upgrades that you need 1 more than what the game tells you you need, like the first upgrade costs 20 chez but you need 21 and so on. you should add more ugprades and maybe new mechanics if you do cause i see you said you made this a long time ago

[Bump & Blast]

very cool concept and fun, i think you should give the player more time to read the instructions and some sound effects would be cool too. you should also add more upgrades to add strategy to the game and after a couple rounds you run out of upgrades which i think happens too soon, and maybe add more levels

HughGiace responds:

Thanks for the feedback, and for playing all the way through on release day! I just added a leaderboard.

[Banana Clicker]

i think your score and progress applies to everyone cause as soon as i got into the game i had 11 digits of highscore and i had over 500 bananas without me doing anything